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Sample 1st Paragraph Personal Statement for Employment Position, Job Application

I feel that I am a strong candidate for the position of Housing Coordinator and Graduate Fellow Assistant Complex Director for a variety of reasons: the fact that I am highly responsible, extremely hard-working, gregarious, and always approach all of my professional duties with a sense of humor and a great appreciation for the importance teamwork. Furthermore, the fact that I am currently enrolled as a graduate student in Computer Science illustrates another extremely important asset that I have to contribute as a graduate fellow, also giving my all to the information management side of Housing Coordination at XXXX University.

Working together as a team we strive to create the best personal statement possible, to give you an advantage over other applicants. I am an experienced professional who has read and edited thousands of Personal Statements and Statements of Purpose. Most editing services only focus on the technical aspects of the statements: grammar, spelling, and punctuation. Instead, I consider the more important aspects, personal tone, flow, and content. Most importantly, I will help you express your creative ideas concerning your long-term goals and your contribution to humanity and society. The final product of my editing may be the beginning of your professional success, a solid investment in your future. Please note that I attend to my clients in the order in which I have received their payments. 

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