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PHD Information Systems, Chinese

I was fascinated by numbers from my first arithmetic lessons. While others struggled, I saw patterns and possibilities and even beauty. So my love of mathematics began and developed into a fascination with computing and on to the business applications of mathematics and computing. This has led me to…

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PHD Biostatistics, Multilingual Chinese

I was fascinated by numbers from my first arithmetic lessons. While others struggled, I saw patterns and possibilities and even beauty. In Middle School in China, I was the winner of the second prize in the National Mathematical Competition, and this gave me great confidence in my ability and set me…

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Masters, Health Informatics, Business Intelligence, Data

Determined to contribute to future advances in healthcare provision, I seek to become a Business Intelligence Analyst who deploys Predictive Analytics and Big Data techniques in addition to traditional BI in this vital area. I am applying for The Master of Information Systems Management (MISM) Degre…

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Master’s Program in Statistics, Chinese

Your particularly distinguished Master’s Program in Statistics at XXXX University is my first choice for graduate school because of your program's sheer quality reflected in the curriculum's thoroughgoing nature and your attention to applications of statistical models and theoretical foundations. I …

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Architecture Personal History, Ukranian Woman

My career path was set into motion long before my birth – my grandfather was a highly influential architect in our native Ukraine. As a result, many of our family discussions were about building new projects as I grew up. My family tells me that I inherited my talent in drawing and spatial vision fr…

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Masters Statistics Personal History, Chinese


Raised in China, where my exposure to English was minimal, coming to America and enrolling in college represented a great challenge for me. But the hard part was yet to come: getting good grades. While I wish my rates could have been higher, given the uphill battle that I confronted to bring my …

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Master’s Homeland Security, Military, Indian

I hope to be accepted to your especially distinguished Master’s Program in Homeland Security at XXXX University because of the sheer excellence of your program and the depth and breadth of your curriculum. I am a natural candidate for a career in Homeland Security because of the intensity of my patr…

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Occupational Therapy Doctorate, OTD, African

Your distinguished Occupational Therapy Doctorate (OTD) Program at the University of XXXX is my first choice for graduate study for various reasons, most of all the sheer excellence of your program. I decided on your schedule some time ago and have worked very hard for more than a year to complete t…

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LOR, Financial Engineering

To Whom It May Concern:

I am pleased to write this letter of recommendation for Mr. XXXX. I have had the pleasure of working closely with XXXX throughout the time he was with us, and I marveled at his rapid professional development throughout that period. Thus, I have ultimate confidence in his abi…

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Development Studies Masters, Saudi Woman

As a young woman determined to carve out my professional space in Saudi Arabian society, I fully intend to have a successful career in business and finance. I am keenly aware of the many issues, and challenges women face in one of the world’s most patriarchal countries. I am also mindful of and sens…

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LOR, Masters Real Estate Development

To whom it may concern:

Having served as the Academic Advisor of XXXX at XXXX University for three years, it is a special honor for me to recommend him to your Masters' Program in Real Estate Development, especially so since he is one of my all-time favorite students.

I earned my own Bachelor's an…

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LOR, Occupational Therapy, OT


To Whom It May Concern,

My name is XXXX XXXX and I have been employed for the last X number of years as an Occupational Therapist at XXXX Childen’s Rehabilitation Center in City, State. Not long ago I had the profound pleasure of getting to know XXXX throughout the course of several days work…

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LLM Intellectual Property, UK, Chinese


My awareness of the enormous good that lawyers can do, and an interest in pursuing the law as a career, came in 2012 when I worked as a medical volunteer among the underprivileged in Tunisia.  I was helping young drug addicts in the slums and came into contact with young lawyers working for the …

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Masters Statistics, Economics, Chinese

I was fascinated by numbers from my first arithmetic lessons. While others struggled, I saw patterns and possibilities and knew, even then, where my future lay. I was lucky to receive strong encouragement in my passion from my parents, even if my great enthusiasm for numbers was a little mystifying …

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MS Statistics, Chinese, Mathematics

I hope to be accepted very much aware of the competitive nature of your MS Program in Statistics at XXXX University. Nevertheless, based on my background and preparation as a stellar student, I am sure I can excel in your program at Harvard. I will finish my undergraduate studies in Applied Mathemat…

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Sample Personal Statement for Employment, Medical Assistant

Much of my significant healthcare experience and background has been gained in some of the most challenging settings, including my own troubled country of Liberia. I have necessarily had to demonstrate skills in planning, prioritizing, organization, self-reliance, originality, persistence, and makin…

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Fellowship International Relations, Chinese

The worth of a subject, among most people I know, is measured only in terms of its income-creating potential. My choice of History was met with disbelief among family and friends who could see no way of capitalizing on knowledge of the past. Bright people are expected to study business, medicine, or…

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Undergraduate Degree Architecture, Singapore

I am a 24-year-old woman from Singapore who has long dreamed of studying in the UK, and I have developed a solid business background in real estate and management. My interest in architecture, urban design and development, and progressive respect for our environment through green, sustainable urban …

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EDD Educational Administration, Mixed Race

I am an educational administrator who wants to attain a terminal degree in my field to make the entire contribution possible towards educational reform and the ongoing improvement and implementation of progressive educational policies, especially in my home state of Virginia. I grew up speaking Span…

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Residency in Family Medicine, Nigerian



It is now some years since I practiced as a physician in Nigeria. However, I have spent the intervening period working in a medical environment in the US, with which I am now very familiar. In addition to my medical-related work in the US, I have maintained a close interest in recent medic…

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