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MRED, Indian Sikh Real Estate Development Professional

Being accepted to and completing XXXX University’s Masters in Real Estate Development Program will be the crowning achievement of my life. After earning my Bachelors Degree in Business Administration in 2010, I accepted a position with XXXX Capital Group in New York as an Analyst in the Equity Resea…

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Real Estate Southern California, Chinese American

I believe that I posses the right qualities for the achievement of excellence in your rigorous Real Estate Program at XXXX University: dedication, diligence, and a very high level of motivation that keeps me working way into the night. I see your program as the finest of its kind online and studying…

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MSW, Behavior Analysis, Chinese, Spanish

My father was an immigrant to Ecuador from China and, as a child, I witnessed his struggles to adapt to a new culture and language and to navigate his way through various difficult bureaucratic obstacles. My concern about his plight made me determined to ‘make a difference’ in the lives of people wh…

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OT Masters, Piano, Kinesiology, French Canadian

A French Canadian woman now 22, I feel strongly that I am an excellent candidate for selection to a Master’s Degree Program in Occupational Therapy because of my sheer energy and love of life. I play the piano, guitar, sing, swim, and do yoga. Thus, I feel that I have special gifts that serve to bri…

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Personal Statement Real Estate Development

I have my heart set on earning my Masters Degree in Real Estate Development at the XXXX School at XXXX University for several reasons. Most of all, I want to savor the experience of graduate school and learn as much as I can, so I prefer a two-year program. Among 2-year programs, XXXX is definitely …

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PHD Nutrition and Food Science, Nigerian

The youngest of four children, my mother is a widow having lost my father in 2012 after a long period of illness. Since childhood, studying and learning has been my lifelong pursuit. My mother was a primary school teacher and instilled in us a reading culture which nurtured the development of my inq…

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Master Analytical Statistics, Mathematics Chinese

I have loved Mathematics since I became aware of numbers and their power and since a young age have sought, where possible, to express real life problems of all kinds in terms of numbers in order to find a solution and often found this to be a useful exercise.

My love of mathematics and its pract…

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Masters Food Science, Development, African

I hold a bachelor degree in Food Science from XXXX University and have 5 years’ experience in product development, food technology and research.   My goal in pursuing a Master’s degree at XXU is to acquire the high-level skills and knowledge which will enable me to assist in providing effective solu…

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MPH Epidemiology and Biostatistics, Doctor, Yemen

 

A Cardiologist trained in Egypt as well as my native Yemen, I am applying to study towards the Master’s Degree in Public Health at XXXX University (Epidemiology and Biostatistics) because my extended family and I have all chosen XXXX as our home and we are most happy with our choice. A permane…

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Master’s SLP, Research, Aphasia and/or Disphasia

From the experience that I have acquired to date in relating to those who suffer difficulties in speech communication it is clear to me that it takes a very special type of person to treat speech disorders successfully; that empathy, determination and enormous patience, together with substantial tec…

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PHD Educational Technology, Indian Woman

My Mother is an artist and she runs her own boutique as well as teaching arts and crafts to needy children. For many years now, my mother and I have worked together as volunteers every Sunday, most of the day, teaching children and young people that were orphaned or abandoned. My mother teaches them…

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Public Health Cancer Epidemiology, Chinese

The Department of Epidemiology at the XXXX School of Public Health is my first choice for graduate school because I feel strongly that it is the best Public Health program with a focus on Epidemiology in the world. A Chinese man who has worked intensively in English since I was six years old, attend…

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OT Masters, American Woman, Love for Children

A sensitive young woman with a very special love for children, I was born and raised in North Carolina, where flight was invented and I have always dreamed big, eager to see the world. I hope to be selected for your distinguished Master’s Degree program in Occupational Therapy on the basis of my int…

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OT Bridge Program COTA to Masters, Pakistani

Your Master’s of Science Program in Occupational Therapy at the XXXX Institute of Technology (NEIT) is my first choice among bridge programs from COTA to the Master’s Degree in OT. I am especially attracted to the idea of weekend classes. I have gotten to know students from the XXXX who graduated as…

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Master’s Global, Financial Economics, Indian

My professional objective is to spend the rest of my life serving society as a business consultant, especially on an international level. Although my MBA is from XXXX, which provides its students with one of the finest foundations in business in the world, to accomplish my goal of providing my clien…

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MSW Online, PTSD, Homeless Vets, Trinidad and Tobago

The University of XXXX online MSW Program is my first choice for earning my Master’s in Social Work Degree primarily because of its sheer excellence. In addition, the finest social workers that I have had the opportunity to work with professionally have all graduated from UXX and they could not spea…

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MSW, Child Welfare, Poverty, Homelessness

I feel strongly that I am the best fit for your MSW Program at XXXX (XXX) because I feel strongly that we are in need of social workers who live, think, work, and practice at the local level, and your educational institution stands at the center of the community that I know and love. I am currently …

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Masters SLP, Speech-Language, Filipina

Probably the strongest aspect of my application to your distinguished SLP Program at XXXX University (UXX) is that I already have over 2 years professional experience as an SLPA. From August 2013 through September 2015, I worked at a private clinic called XXX, with students diagnosed with moderate t…

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SLP Speech Pathology Masters, ADHD, Chinese

A young Chinese woman who is full of life and a very hard worker, I am certain that I want to have a long professional lifetime that is full of both children and older people since both are an integral part of my personal professional vision for making my fullest contribution to society, especially …

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International Dentist DDS/DMD, Indian Applicant

Having completed dental school and gained extensive experience practicing dentistry in my native India, I have now made the USA my permanent home and I ask for admission to your competitive DDS Program so that I can become the finest dentist possible. I seek to give my all to the advancement of pref…

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