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Master Statistics, Deep Learning, Chinese Applicant

I always found statistics interesting and useful. It is amazing that behind seemingly messy and irregular numbers, hides the patterns in data and solutions to many problems. Using statistical methods to analyze data is like solving a puzzle to me. I am currently a senior at the University of XXXX, t…

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MSW, Latina, Mental Health, Underserved

I first moved to New York City at the age of twelve from the Dominican Republic. Although I was born in New York City I spent most of my childhood with my grandparents in the Dominican Republic. I did, however, live for a year in Miami where I completed the 3rd grade, which helped me develop a multi…

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LOR CAAPID, International Dentist, Indian

To Whom It May Concern,

My name is Dr. XXXX XXXX, DDS and I am writing this Letter of Recommendation on behalf of XXXX XXXX who I could not more highly recommend for selection and admission to your DDS Program. I am a General Dentist and my practice, North Side Dental, is located in Edmonton, Alb…

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CAAPID Application, Foreign Trained, International

After earning my degree in Dental Surgery in my native India, I almost immediately began to put long hours into practicing; but, I also made it a point to continue to study on as well, and to lay the foundations for eventual specialization in dentistry. I graduated from dental school in 2011 and ear…

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LOR Nurse Anesthesia, Cardio-Surgical ICU

To Whom It May Concern,

My name is Dr. XXXX, M.D. and I am an anesthesiologist in Miami, Florida and affiliated with multiple hospitals in the area, including Miami Veterans Affairs Healthcare System and the University of Miami Hospital. I received my medical degree from the Central University of…

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LOR, Public Health, Chinese Applicant

To Whom It May Concern,

My name is Dr. XXXX and I am an Assistant Professor of Kinesiology in the School of Public Health at the University of XXXX and I have served in this capacity for approximately 4 years. I am writing this recommendation on behalf of XXXX who was a student in my class, Found…

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MPH, Online Masters, Afro-Caribbean Woman

At the center of my intellectual and professional interests stand the prevention and management of chronic disease and the search for ways to improve health at the same time that we reduce both costs and healthcare disparities, especially through the intervention and development of a better understa…

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PHD Public Health Investigation, Iranian Applicant

I have served the community as a Public Health Investigator for the past 10 years including 5 years as a supervisor. This ‘boots on the ground’ experience of working with those who are homeless, addicted and psychologically disturbed has given me an insight into the many ways that well-intended poli…

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Indian Dentist Personal Statement Sample, Cleft Lip Palate

I am a truly motivated dental practitioner with a strong commitment to leadership and helping the underserved. I do not hope to secure a stable income in dentistry, or attain an impressive list of accolades for my resume. I am not involved for my own gain: I will dedicate my career to helping the un…

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MS Real Estate Development Arab-American Applicant

Born and raised in Detroit, Michigan and then later in North Carolina, my father is from the Middle East and my mother from North Africa. Thus, I have grown up noticing, appreciating, and celebrating diversity. We moved from Detroit to North Carolina for my freshman year in high school and built a n…

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MSC OT, Canadian Applying to Scotland

 

I hope very much to be selected for admission to the particularly distinguished MSC Program in Occupational Therapy at XXXX University because I would simply love to live in Scotland and I see XXXX as the finest OT Masters Program in the British Isles. A young Canadian woman, I want to remain in…

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Indian Nurse, DNP Nurse Anesthesia

A nurse from India, I came to the US as a permanent resident in October of 2007 at the age of 25, after passing the CGFNS (Commission on Graduates of Foreign Nursing Schools), IELTS and NCLEX exams. This opportunity came in response to the shortage of qualified nurses in the US and we were given an …

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MPA, Mexican-American, Border Issues

While born in the USA, I was raised in Weslaco Texas, not far from Mexico, the land of origin for my family. I find myself increasingly drawn to the border and border issues, the moral and political dimensions, the suffering that surrounds or results from the border. The plight of children, in parti…

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Pakistani Speech Therapist, Communications Disorders

My central goal is to become the finest multilingual and multicultural SLP Therapist possible. A young Pakistani woman who was raised almost entirely in Canada, it was not easy for me to get up the courage to attend graduate school in our native Pakistan rather than Canada; but I did it. Now that I …

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SLP Masters, Bilingual, Dominican Woman

A bilingual and bicultural Dominican woman born and raised in New York City, I hope to attain a Master’s Degree in Speech Language Pathology with a bilingual extension (Spanish/English). Looking forward to advice and guidance concerning career options as a graduate student in your program, I have ta…

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MRED, Indian Sikh Real Estate Development Professional

Being accepted to and completing XXXX University’s Masters in Real Estate Development Program will be the crowning achievement of my life. After earning my Bachelors Degree in Business Administration in 2010, I accepted a position with XXXX Capital Group in New York as an Analyst in the Equity Resea…

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Real Estate Southern California, Chinese American

I believe that I posses the right qualities for the achievement of excellence in your rigorous Real Estate Program at XXXX University: dedication, diligence, and a very high level of motivation that keeps me working way into the night. I see your program as the finest of its kind online and studying…

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MSW, Behavior Analysis, Chinese, Spanish

My father was an immigrant to Ecuador from China and, as a child, I witnessed his struggles to adapt to a new culture and language and to navigate his way through various difficult bureaucratic obstacles. My concern about his plight made me determined to ‘make a difference’ in the lives of people wh…

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OT Masters, Piano, Kinesiology, French Canadian

A French Canadian woman now 22, I feel strongly that I am an excellent candidate for selection to a Master’s Degree Program in Occupational Therapy because of my sheer energy and love of life. I play the piano, guitar, sing, swim, and do yoga. Thus, I feel that I have special gifts that serve to bri…

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Personal Statement Real Estate Development

I have my heart set on earning my Masters Degree in Real Estate Development at the XXXX School at XXXX University for several reasons. Most of all, I want to savor the experience of graduate school and learn as much as I can, so I prefer a two-year program. Among 2-year programs, XXXX is definitely …

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