The Masters of Real Estate Development (MSRED) Program at XXXX is my first choice among Master’s Degree Programs. I feel strongly that it is the best program in the country to meet my objectives of total immersion into real estate at an academic level. This is especially true since I seek to achieve…
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MSRED, Master's Real Estate Development
MPH Public Health Administration, Oman, Dentist
A dentist from Oman, I am keen to learn everything I can about public health and health administration. For this reason, earning the Master of Public Health Degree at XXXX University will enable and empower me to meet my central career goal of doing all that I can to improve health care in Oman, gen…
Masters Communication Disorders, Progressive Causes
A naturalized US citizen born in Germany, for as long as I can remember, XXXX has been my home. Thus, XXXX University is a natural choice among Master’s Degree Programs in Speech-Language Pathology. I hope to be selected to contribute to the diversity of your program based on my great passion for an…
Statement of Purpose Biology, Malaysian Applicant
I grew up in a low-income family in Malaysia and attended schools that were inadequately staffed and equipped by western standards. However, I applied myself with exceptional determination and diligence to enable me to pursue undergraduate studies. I was ranked first in my class and was awarded a di…
Masters Computer Science, Saudi Arabian Applicant
I was fascinated with computers from my first experience with them, and this fascination has developed into a passion as my education has progressed. I thoroughly enjoyed my IT undergraduate education at the prestigious University of Jeddah and gained my degree in 2015. I have excelled in my undergr…
Master Statistics, Deep Learning, Chinese Applicant
I have always found statistics exciting and valuable. It is incredible that behind seemingly messy and irregular numbers hides the patterns in data and solutions to many problems. Using statistical methods to analyze data is like solving a puzzle to me. I am currently a senior at the University of X…
MSW, Latina, Mental Health, Underserved
At age twelve, I first moved to New York City from the Dominican Republic. Although I was born in New York City, I spent most of my childhood with my grandparents in the Dominican Republic. However, I lived for a year in Miami, where I completed the 3rd grade, which helped me develop a multicultural…
LOR CAAPID, International Dentist, Indian
To Whom It May Concern,
My name is Dr. XXXX XXXX, DDS, and I am writing this Letter of Recommendation on behalf of XXXX XXXX, which I could not more highly recommend for selection and admission to your DDS Program. I am a General Dentist, and my practice, North Side Dental, is located in Edmonton, …
CAAPID Application, Foreign Trained, International
After earning my degree in Dental Surgery in my native India, I almost immediately began to put long hours into practice. Still, I also made it a point to continue to study and lay the foundations for eventual specialization in dentistry. I graduated from dental school in 2011 and earned my Master o…
LOR, Public Health, Chinese Applicant
To Whom It May Concern,
My name is Dr. XXXX, and I am an Assistant Professor of Kinesiology in the School of Public Health at the University of XXXX. I have served in this capacity for approximately four years. I am writing this recommendation on behalf of XXXX, a student in my Foundations of Publi…
MPH, Online Masters, Afro-Caribbean Woman
At the center of my intellectual and professional interests stand the prevention and management of chronic disease and the search for ways to improve health at the same time that we reduce both costs and healthcare disparities, primarily through the intervention and development of a better understan…
PHD Public Health Investigation, Iranian Applicant
I have served the community as a Public Health Investigator for the past ten years, including five years as a supervisor. This ‘boots on ground experience of working with those who are homeless, addicted, and psychologically disturbed have given me an insight into the many ways that well-intended po…
Indian Dentist Personal Statement Sample, Cleft Lip Palate
I am a genuinely motivated dental practitioner with a solid commitment to leadership and helping the underserved. I do not hope to secure a stable income in dentistry or attain an impressive list of accolades for my resume. I am not involved in my gain: I will dedicate my career to helping the under…
MS Real Estate Development Arab-American Applicant
Born and raised in Detroit, Michigan, then later in North Carolina, my father is from the Middle East, and my mother is from North Africa. Thus, I have grown up noticing, appreciating, and celebrating diversity. We moved from Detroit to North Carolina for my first year in high school and built a new…
MSC OT, Canadian Applying to Scotland
I hope very much to be selected for admission to the particularly distinguished MSC Program in Occupational Therapy at XXXX University because I would simply love to live in Scotland and I see XXXX as the finest OT Masters Program in the British Isles. A young Canadian woman, I want to remain in…
MPA, Mexican-American, Border Issues
While born in the USA, I was raised in Weslaco, Texas, not far from Mexico, the land of origin for my family. I find myself increasingly drawn to the border and border issues, the moral and political dimensions, and the suffering that surrounds or results from the border. The plight of children, in …
Pakistani Speech Therapist, Communications Disorders
My central goal is to become the finest multilingual and multicultural SLP Therapist possible. As a young Pakistani woman raised almost entirely in Canada, it was not easy for me to get the courage to attend graduate school in our native Pakistan rather than Canada; but I did it. Now that I have ear…
SLP Masters, Bilingual, Dominican Woman
A bilingual and bicultural Dominican woman born and raised in New York City, I hope to attain a Master’s Degree in Speech-Language Pathology with a bilingual extension (Spanish/English). Looking forward to advise and guidance concerning career options as a graduate student in your program, I have ta…
MRED, Indian Sikh Real Estate Development Professional
Being accepted to and completing XXXX University’s Masters in Real Estate Development Program will be the crowning achievement of my life. After earning my bachelor's degree in Business Administration in 2010, I accepted a position with XXXX Capital Group in New York as an Analyst in the Equity Rese…
Real Estate Southern California, Chinese American
I believe that I possess the right qualities for achieving excellence in your rigorous Real Estate Program at XXXX University: dedication, diligence, and a very high level of motivation that keeps me working way into the night. I see your program as the finest of its kind online, and studying with t…
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- MSRED, Master's Real Estate Development
- MPH Public Health Administration, Oman, Dentist
- Masters Communication Disorders, Progressive Causes
- Statement of Purpose Biology, Malaysian Applicant
- Masters Computer Science, Saudi Arabian Applicant
- Master Statistics, Deep Learning, Chinese Applicant
- MSW, Latina, Mental Health, Underserved
- LOR CAAPID, International Dentist, Indian
- CAAPID Application, Foreign Trained, International
- LOR, Public Health, Chinese Applicant
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