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MSRED, Master's Real Estate Development

The Masters of Real Estate Development (MSRED) Program at XXXX is my first choice among Master’s Degree Programs as I feel strongly that it is the best program in the country for me to meet my objectives of a full immersion into real estate at an academic level. This is especially true since I seek …

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MPH Public Health Administration, Oman, Dentist

A dentist from Oman, I am most keen to learn everything that I can about public health and health administration. For this reason, earning the Master of Public Health Degree at XXXX University will enable and empower me to meet my central career goal of doing all that I can to improve health care in…

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Masters Communication Disorders, Progressive Causes

A naturalized US citizen born in Germany, for as long as I can remember XXXX has been my home. Thus, XXXX University is a natural choice among Master’s Degree Programs in Speech Language Pathology. I hope to be selected to contribute to the diversity of your program based on my great passion for and…

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Statement of Purpose Biology, Malaysian Applicant

I grew up in a poor family in Malaysia and attended schools which were inadequately staffed and equipped by western standards. However, I applied myself with exceptional determination and diligence to enable me to pursue undergraduate studies. I was ranked first in my class and was awarded a distinc…

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Masters Computer Science, Saudi Arabian Applicant

I was fascinated with computers from my first experience of them and this fascination has developed into a passion as my education has progressed and I have thoroughly enjoyed my undergraduate education in IT at the prestigious University of Jeddah and gained my degree in 2015. I have excelled in my…

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Master Statistics, Deep Learning, Chinese Applicant

I always found statistics interesting and useful. It is amazing that behind seemingly messy and irregular numbers, hides the patterns in data and solutions to many problems. Using statistical methods to analyze data is like solving a puzzle to me. I am currently a senior at the University of XXXX, t…

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MSW, Latina, Mental Health, Underserved

I first moved to New York City at the age of twelve from the Dominican Republic. Although I was born in New York City I spent most of my childhood with my grandparents in the Dominican Republic. I did, however, live for a year in Miami where I completed the 3rd grade, which helped me develop a multi…

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LOR CAAPID, International Dentist, Indian

To Whom It May Concern,

My name is Dr. XXXX XXXX, DDS and I am writing this Letter of Recommendation on behalf of XXXX XXXX who I could not more highly recommend for selection and admission to your DDS Program. I am a General Dentist and my practice, North Side Dental, is located in Edmonton, Alb…

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CAAPID Application, Foreign Trained, International

After earning my degree in Dental Surgery in my native India, I almost immediately began to put long hours into practicing; but, I also made it a point to continue to study on as well, and to lay the foundations for eventual specialization in dentistry. I graduated from dental school in 2011 and ear…

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LOR Nurse Anesthesia, Cardio-Surgical ICU

To Whom It May Concern,

My name is Dr. XXXX, M.D. and I am an anesthesiologist in Miami, Florida and affiliated with multiple hospitals in the area, including Miami Veterans Affairs Healthcare System and the University of Miami Hospital. I received my medical degree from the Central University of…

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LOR, Public Health, Chinese Applicant

To Whom It May Concern,

My name is Dr. XXXX and I am an Assistant Professor of Kinesiology in the School of Public Health at the University of XXXX and I have served in this capacity for approximately 4 years. I am writing this recommendation on behalf of XXXX who was a student in my class, Found…

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MPH, Online Masters, Afro-Caribbean Woman

At the center of my intellectual and professional interests stand the prevention and management of chronic disease and the search for ways to improve health at the same time that we reduce both costs and healthcare disparities, especially through the intervention and development of a better understa…

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PHD Public Health Investigation, Iranian Applicant

I have served the community as a Public Health Investigator for the past 10 years including 5 years as a supervisor. This ‘boots on the ground’ experience of working with those who are homeless, addicted and psychologically disturbed has given me an insight into the many ways that well-intended poli…

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Indian Dentist Personal Statement Sample, Cleft Lip Palate

I am a truly motivated dental practitioner with a strong commitment to leadership and helping the underserved. I do not hope to secure a stable income in dentistry, or attain an impressive list of accolades for my resume. I am not involved for my own gain: I will dedicate my career to helping the un…

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MS Real Estate Development Arab-American Applicant

Born and raised in Detroit, Michigan and then later in North Carolina, my father is from the Middle East and my mother from North Africa. Thus, I have grown up noticing, appreciating, and celebrating diversity. We moved from Detroit to North Carolina for my freshman year in high school and built a n…

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MSC OT, Canadian Applying to Scotland

 

I hope very much to be selected for admission to the particularly distinguished MSC Program in Occupational Therapy at XXXX University because I would simply love to live in Scotland and I see XXXX as the finest OT Masters Program in the British Isles. A young Canadian woman, I want to remain in…

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Indian Nurse, DNP Nurse Anesthesia

A nurse from India, I came to the US as a permanent resident in October of 2007 at the age of 25, after passing the CGFNS (Commission on Graduates of Foreign Nursing Schools), IELTS and NCLEX exams. This opportunity came in response to the shortage of qualified nurses in the US and we were given an …

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MPA, Mexican-American, Border Issues

While born in the USA, I was raised in Weslaco Texas, not far from Mexico, the land of origin for my family. I find myself increasingly drawn to the border and border issues, the moral and political dimensions, the suffering that surrounds or results from the border. The plight of children, in parti…

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Pakistani Speech Therapist, Communications Disorders

My central goal is to become the finest multilingual and multicultural SLP Therapist possible. A young Pakistani woman who was raised almost entirely in Canada, it was not easy for me to get up the courage to attend graduate school in our native Pakistan rather than Canada; but I did it. Now that I …

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SLP Masters, Bilingual, Dominican Woman

A bilingual and bicultural Dominican woman born and raised in New York City, I hope to attain a Master’s Degree in Speech Language Pathology with a bilingual extension (Spanish/English). Looking forward to advice and guidance concerning career options as a graduate student in your program, I have ta…

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