I have always found statistics exciting and valuable. It is incredible that behind seemingly messy and irregular numbers hides the patterns in data and solutions to many problems. Using statistical methods to analyze data is like solving a puzzle to me. I am currently a senior at the University of X…
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Master Statistics, Deep Learning, Chinese Applicant
LOR CAAPID, International Dentist, Indian
To Whom It May Concern,
My name is Dr. XXXX XXXX, DDS, and I am writing this Letter of Recommendation on behalf of XXXX XXXX, which I could not more highly recommend for selection and admission to your DDS Program. I am a General Dentist, and my practice, North Side Dental, is located in Edmonton, …
LOR, Public Health, Chinese Applicant
To Whom It May Concern,
My name is Dr. XXXX, and I am an Assistant Professor of Kinesiology in the School of Public Health at the University of XXXX. I have served in this capacity for approximately four years. I am writing this recommendation on behalf of XXXX, a student in my Foundations of Publi…
MS Real Estate Development Arab-American Applicant
Born and raised in Detroit, Michigan, then later in North Carolina, my father is from the Middle East, and my mother is from North Africa. Thus, I have grown up noticing, appreciating, and celebrating diversity. We moved from Detroit to North Carolina for my first year in high school and built a new…
MSC OT, Canadian Applying to Scotland
I hope very much to be selected for admission to the particularly distinguished MSC Program in Occupational Therapy at XXXX University because I would simply love to live in Scotland and I see XXXX as the finest OT Masters Program in the British Isles. A young Canadian woman, I want to remain in…
MRED, Indian Sikh Real Estate Development Professional
Being accepted to and completing XXXX University’s Masters in Real Estate Development Program will be the crowning achievement of my life. After earning my bachelor's degree in Business Administration in 2010, I accepted a position with XXXX Capital Group in New York as an Analyst in the Equity Rese…
Real Estate Southern California, Chinese American
I believe that I possess the right qualities for achieving excellence in your rigorous Real Estate Program at XXXX University: dedication, diligence, and a very high level of motivation that keeps me working way into the night. I see your program as the finest of its kind online, and studying with t…
OT Masters, Piano, Kinesiology, French Canadian
A French Canadian woman now 22, I feel strongly that I am an excellent candidate for selection to a Master’s Degree Program in Occupational Therapy because of my sheer energy and love of life. I play the piano and guitar, sing, swim, and do yoga. Thus, I feel I have unique gifts that bring out the b…
Personal Statement Real Estate Development
I have my heart set on earning my Masters Degree in Real Estate Development at the XXXX School at XXXX University for several reasons. Most of all, I want to savor the experience of graduate school and learn as much as I can, so I prefer a two-year program. Among 2-year programs, XXXX is definitely …
PHD Nutrition and Food Science, Nigerian
The youngest of four children, my mother is a widow, having lost my father in 2012 after a long illness. Since childhood, studying and learning have been my lifelong pursuit. My mother was a primary school teacher and instilled in us a reading culture that nurtured the development of my inquiring mi…
Master Analytical Statistics, Mathematics Chinese
I have loved Mathematics since I became aware of numbers and their power and since a young age has sought, where possible, to express real-life problems of all kinds in terms of numbers to find a solution and often found this to be a helpful exercise.
My love of mathematics and its practical applic…
Masters Food Science, Development, African
I hold a bachelor's degree in Food Science from XXXX University and have fiveive years’ experience in product development, food technol,ogy, and research. My goal in pursuing a Master’s degree at XXU is to acquire the high-level skills and knowledge which will enable me to assist in providing prac…
PHD Educational Technology, Indian Woman
My Mother is an artist; she runs her boutique and teaches arts and crafts to needy children. For many years now, my mother and I have worked together as volunteers every Sunday, most of the day, teaching children and young people that were orphaned or abandoned. My mother teaches them mostly how to …
OT Masters, American Woman, Love for Children
A sensitive young woman with an extraordinary love for children, I was born and raised in North Carolina, where flight was invented, and I have always dreamed big, eager to see the world. I hope to be selected for your distinguished Master’s Degree program in Occupational Therapy based on my intense…
OT Bridge Program COTA to Masters, Pakistani
Your Master’s of Science Program in Occupational Therapy at the XXXX Institute of Technology (NEIT) is my first choice among bridge programs from COTA to the Master’s Degree in OT. I am especially attracted to the idea of weekend classes. I have gotten to know students from the XXXX who graduated as…
Master’s Global, Financial Economics, Indian
My professional objective is to spend the rest of my life serving society as a business consultant, especially internationally. Although my MBA is from XXXX, which provides its students with one of the best foundations in the business in the world, to accomplish my goal of providing my clients with …
Masters Real Estate, NYC, American Woman
XXXX is my first choice for graduate school because I see New York City as the dynamic cutting edge of real estate development in America. Even though I was born and raised in San Francisco, which has a lot to offer culturally and economically, I have fallen in love with NYC. XXXX not only has what …
Mental Health Counseling, NYC, Chinese
My central dream is to become a licensed counselor and to live my professional life to promoting the mental health of my community, particularly the well-being of members of Asian societies. XXU’s Master’s Program in Mental Health Counseling is my first choice for graduate school because o…
Biotechnology Masters, Chinese Applicant
It has always been my intention to ‘make a difference rather than merely make a living. My wish to join this Master’s program is an essential step in enabling me to make that difference. I can think of a few areas of work and research that can provide such general and vital benefits as Biotechnology…
Masters Accountancy, New York City, Chinese
The particularly distinguished Master of Accounting Program at the XXXX School at XXU is my first choice for graduate school for a variety of reasons, including the sheer excellence and highly respected nature of your Master’s Program in Accounting; your location is another huge factor. I see New Yo…
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- Master Statistics, Deep Learning, Chinese Applicant
- LOR CAAPID, International Dentist, Indian
- LOR, Public Health, Chinese Applicant
- MS Real Estate Development Arab-American Applicant
- MSC OT, Canadian Applying to Scotland
- MRED, Indian Sikh Real Estate Development Professional
- Real Estate Southern California, Chinese American
- OT Masters, Piano, Kinesiology, French Canadian
- Personal Statement Real Estate Development
- PHD Nutrition and Food Science, Nigerian
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