I was a small, premature baby and, although my medical problems were not severe, they did involve frequent visits to hospital in my early childhood. So I became used to the environment of a hospital and observed the staff in the way that only a child can. I saw that some nurses and doctors did thei…
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Medical School, Korean ICU Nurse
Medical School, Immigrant Parents, Vietnam
I wish to study medicine to obtain the skills and knowledge I require to help redistribute health as a social good on behalf of the disadvantaged. As the child of Vietnamese parents, who arrived in the United States when I was 9 years old, I learnt the value of healthcare very early on in life. My …
Medical School, Iranian Immigrant to Canada
I was raised in Tehran, but moved to Canada in 1998, when I was 10 years old. Doctors have been my heroes since my childhood. An avid daydreamer as a child, I would often spend hours each day conjuring up fantasy visions of myself as an important doctor, working alongside my colleagues and arriving …
Medical School Admission, Nigerian Immigrant
Witnessing my father’s death from sudden cardiac arrest when I was five years old was an extremely traumatic experience that played a foundational role in the development of my interest in studying medicine and becoming a physician. One minute he was asking me how my day had been at school, the next…
Osteopathic Medical School, Asian Applicant, Canada
Half Japanese and half Chinese, I am a young woman in my fourth year of undergraduate studies who lives in Canada and hopes to attend medical school here in my newly adopted home. Born in Japan and raised mostly in Taiwan, I am a natural for appreciation of diversity. Very serious minded for my age,…
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