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PHD Social Work Mental Health Counseling


My professional research interests are primarily in the area of empirically-based mental health treatment models to assist children and adolescents with mental health issues and/or delinquency behaviors. XXU is my first choice for earning the PHD because I feel strongly that I am a good fit with y…

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MS Statistics, Chinese, Mathematics

Very much aware of the competitive nature of your MS Program in Statistics at XXXX University, I hope to be accepted nevertheless on the basis of my background and preparation; a stellar student, I am certain that I can excel in your program at Harvard. I will be finishing my undergraduate studies i…

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Residency in Pediatrics: Chinese Applicant

I was asthmatic from the age of five and was hospitalized on a number of occasions. I observed the world and the adults in it as only a child can. I could see that some doctors and nurses did their job but no more, they cared for me and the other children but other staff also clearly cared about me …

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DDS International Dentist, Orthodontics, Indian

If you look into a dentist’s waiting room in the US, you are likely to see a group of relaxed looking people reading magazines. If you look at the patients queuing up for free treatment in a ‘dental camp’ in India, you will see many swollen faces and pain filled eyes. It has been my privilege to tre…

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Internal Medicine Residency, Philippines

The path to my becoming a doctor has not been an easy one. I knew from a very early age that I wanted to be a physician but, in the Philippines, the costs involved are beyond the means of almost all families, and this was so in my own case. I had been a straight ‘A’ student throughout school, thanks…

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Residency in Family Medicine: Uzbekistan

I was born and raised in Uzbekistan and now reside in California. I hold an M.D. degree awarded by Tashkent Medical University in 1992 and later earned a Ph.D. awarded by the Scientific Research Institute of Pulmonology and Phthisiology, both in Uzbekistan. I am a highly experienced physician and re…

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DDS International Dentist Admission, Nepalese

If you walk into the waiting room of a dentist in the US, you are likely to see a group of relaxed looking people reading magazines. If you walk into the waiting area of a free dental clinic in India or Nepal, you will see many swollen faces and pain filled eyes.  The value of a skilled and dedicate…

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Residency Diagnostic Radiology: Saudi Woman

I am a Saudi woman born in Canada, raised and trained in Saudi Arabia and now residing in Chicago. I hold a first class MBBS degree awarded by the King Abdul-Aziz University, Jeddah. My goal is to undertake a residency in Diagnostic Radiology, sub-specializing in Interventional Radiology, in Canada …

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DDS Admission Application, Asian Woman

What first fired my interest in dentistry was suffering an accident two years ago that resulted in a fractured jaw. I required extensive oral surgery and became interested in the work undertaken to repair the damage done. During the process, a close relationship developed with my surgeon and I have …

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PHD Degree in Economics, Latin America & China

My language skills—near native in French, advanced intermediate Spanish, and several years of German and Chinese—are only matched by my dedication to the studies of economic development, especially in Latin America and China. I look forward to dedicating my life to the study of sustainable economic …

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Master’s Degree Linguistics, Applicant from Ghana

In my home country it is not at all unusual for a pupil, who is excelling in their work, to be asked to assist in the teaching their fellow pupils. As a pupil who did excel and who was, indeed, usually top of the class throughout my school career, I had considerable experience of teaching and also a…

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