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Internal Medicine Residency, Nigerian

Born and raised in Lagos, Nigeria, I have now come to think of myself as African-American, since I am now a naturalized citizen who has been in the USA for 15 years. At 38, I consider myself to be in my prime in every way and always take great care of my own physical strength and resources and that …

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Masters Architecture, Iranian Artist

It was intended that I should be a physician and, in my early teens, I was perfectly happy to go along with this parental ambition. However my family members are mainly involved in engineering, design and architecture and, in my mid teens, genetic influences suddenly seemed to supersede my original …

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Residency in Ob/Gyn, Family Medicine, Community

I have undertaken residencies in General Surgery in India and in Family and Community Medicine in the US. However, having had my own child in the second year of residency and having the experience of treating many low-risk obstetrics/gynecology patients during the latter residency, a growing interes…

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Dental School, Korean Immigrant Applicant

I am a Korean, born and raised in Korea until the age of 16 when I moved to the U.S. with my family. I am bilingual in Korean and English. I hold a BA degree in Chemistry awarded by the University of Virginia.

 If you were to walk into the waiting room of the average dental surgery in most countr…

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Family Medicine Residency, Arab Canadian Woman

I am a female who was born in Morocco but left at the age of eight and was raised in Canada. I speak Arabic, French and English fluently.  I hold a Bachelor’s degree in Psychology and an MD degree from the Medical University of the Americas.

 I had already developed a strong desire to become a…

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Cardiology Fellowship, Ethiopian Applicant

I was born, raised, and went to medical school in Ethiopia where most modern medical tools such as CT scans and MRIs were simply not available. Nevertheless, my professors insisted that the most important medical information is always obtained from interviews with and observation of the patients. I …

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PA Master’s Degree Applicant, Chiropractor USA

I am very keen on outdoor pursuits especially hunting and fishing and, consequently, spend much of my spare time in rural Nevada pursuing these interests. I have come to love the wilder parts of Nevada and the local people who have an interesting view of life and a neighborliness that is heart-warmi…

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